Comments on: Can someone please read my report and tell me how it sounds? http://earthquakequestions.com/can-someone-please-read-my-report-and-tell-me-how-it-sounds.htm Everything You Want To Know About Earthquakes Mon, 23 Apr 2012 18:35:24 +0000 hourly 1 http://wordpress.org/?v=3.3.2 By: Alan M http://earthquakequestions.com/can-someone-please-read-my-report-and-tell-me-how-it-sounds.htm/comment-page-1#comment-476 Alan M Wed, 10 Jun 2009 02:46:27 +0000 http://earthquakequestions.com/can-someone-please-read-my-report-and-tell-me-how-it-sounds.htm#comment-476 It's amazing, you shoudl geat a great mark It's amazing, you shoudl geat a great mark

]]> By: linda bug http://earthquakequestions.com/can-someone-please-read-my-report-and-tell-me-how-it-sounds.htm/comment-page-1#comment-477 linda bug Wed, 10 Jun 2009 02:46:27 +0000 http://earthquakequestions.com/can-someone-please-read-my-report-and-tell-me-how-it-sounds.htm#comment-477 I think it is GREAT !!! I think it is GREAT !!!

]]> By: penguins_rock72 http://earthquakequestions.com/can-someone-please-read-my-report-and-tell-me-how-it-sounds.htm/comment-page-1#comment-478 penguins_rock72 Wed, 10 Jun 2009 02:46:27 +0000 http://earthquakequestions.com/can-someone-please-read-my-report-and-tell-me-how-it-sounds.htm#comment-478 I think this is an A+ report. Not only did you tell about the most terrible Earthquake in San Fransisco, you also gave facts about earthquakes! I think this is an A+ report. Not only did you tell about the most terrible Earthquake in San Fransisco, you also gave facts about earthquakes!

]]> By: RB http://earthquakequestions.com/can-someone-please-read-my-report-and-tell-me-how-it-sounds.htm/comment-page-1#comment-479 RB Wed, 10 Jun 2009 02:46:27 +0000 http://earthquakequestions.com/can-someone-please-read-my-report-and-tell-me-how-it-sounds.htm#comment-479 "The San Francisco Earthquake of 1906 was an occurrence of mostly pure tragedy in history" the above sentence is poorly written, try, "The San Francisco Earthquake of 1906 was a great historical tragedy." or "...one of history's great tragedies." "The San Francisco Earthquake of 1906 was an occurrence of mostly pure tragedy in history"

the above sentence is poorly written, try, "The San Francisco Earthquake of 1906 was a great historical tragedy." or "…one of history's great tragedies."

]]> By: AuntTater http://earthquakequestions.com/can-someone-please-read-my-report-and-tell-me-how-it-sounds.htm/comment-page-1#comment-480 AuntTater Wed, 10 Jun 2009 02:46:27 +0000 http://earthquakequestions.com/can-someone-please-read-my-report-and-tell-me-how-it-sounds.htm#comment-480 In the last line"epicenter would very close to the " should that be "epicenter would be very close to the"? I was confused by the flow of relevance in the first two paragraphs, but my confusion was gone by paragraph three. It was better than anything I could do, so I give it an "A". In the last line"epicenter would very close to the " should that be "epicenter would be very close to the"?
I was confused by the flow of relevance in the first two paragraphs, but my confusion was gone by paragraph three.
It was better than anything I could do, so I give it an "A".

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